When tomorrow Starts Without You.

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ben_pelling
Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.

0 posted 2004-10-12 09:35 PM

When tomorrow starts without you,
And you're not there to see,
If the sun should rise and find my eyes,
All filled with tears for you.

I wish so much I wouldn't cry,
The way I did today,
While thinking of the many things,
I didn't get to say.

You know how much I love you,
As much as you love me,
And each time I think of you,
I dearly miss you so.

But when tomorrow starts without you,
I try to understand,
That an angel came and called to you,
And took you by the hand.

He said your place was ready,
In heaven far above,
And that you'd have to leave behind,
All those you really love.

But as you turn to walk away,
A tear fell from your eye,
For all your life, You'd always thought,
"I didn't want to die."

You had so much to live for,
So much yet left to do,
It seems almost impssible,
That you was leaving I.

I thought of all the yesterdays,
The good ones and the bad,
I thought of all the love we shared,
And all the fun we had.

If I could relive yesterday,
Just even for a while,
I'd say good-bye and kiss you,
and maybe see you smile.

But then I fully realized,
That this could never be,
For emptiness and memories,
Would take the place of the.

And then I thought why?
Why could I be so selfish,
to ignore you for a while,
Only to realize on that fatal night,
We would part for all eternity.

So I live each day in agony,
enduring all this strife,
My only wish,
Is to join you soon,
In heaven one fine day.

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Please go here for first part of this.

Ben.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-10-12 10:51 PM

"You had so much to live for,
So much yet left to do,
It seems almost impssible,
That you was leaving I."

????? ^^^that didnt really make sense. This was pretty good, but the rhyme scheme wasnt so great...there were jsut some parts that sounded way off. But i like the message, and i am sorry this happened, if this was about something that happened to you....

This was ok, i will be looking 4 more though.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-10-13 01:30 AM

oh wow

i really liked this one, it was really sad to read.

i felt all of the motion you went through.

a really good tribute to your friend

love to read more from you.

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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