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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-10-12 12:49 PM

So much junk from packing for future reference
It leaves me with impassible invisible floors
Memories I long to forget stacked in books and pamplets
In the middle of my living hole.

Settle them
Let them rest
Ignite my CIGARETTE lighter
And their erased forever

Poof

I hope he trips and falls
Not to hurt himself
But to continue falling
Like I have been
For the past period of life

He falls to a gentle spot
On the ashes
And a mean red glow

And trillions of years of hurt
The ashes give way to vicious teeth
Designed to shred my dead and dying body
A thick colony of immortal worms
And may they eat and crap and eat and crap and eat and crap

This little blaze of mine
May it weld my name to his skull
Just melt it with the flames
With the little hatefull skull faces in them
And the dancing devils and demons
Prancing from the furnace surface
Then thump my last cigarette out in this melted hole

Let the twelve spears taste his greed
Drip every ounce of suicide and pain
A real kiss
I love you like this
Fool

The demon dies

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

1 posted 2004-10-12 12:56 PM

wow!
a-freaking-men!!
i do believe this is the best i've read from you yet. and so intense!
ever feel like being redundant? good, then...
wow!
a-freaking-men!! (lol - i love it, green!)

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2004-10-12 09:13 AM

A rebirth!

Beautiful . . .
besides describing my entire house:

So much junk from packing for future reference
It leaves me with impassible invisible floors
Memories I long to forget stacked in books and pamplets
In the middle of my living hole.

Good for you, Craig.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2004-10-12 12:43 PM

"A real kiss
I love you like this
Fool

The demon dies..."

"And may they eat and crap and eat and crap and eat and crap"

"Poof"

Atta boy! I was going to quote the whole thing and say damn good after every line but you prolly wouldn't like that, but...ok, how about this: "Poof" ...damn he's good. lol. have a poofy day. no just kidding.

- River

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

4 posted 2004-10-12 09:05 PM

"A real kiss...
I love you like this"

Should I say it again???

Another brilliant o' brilliance! Friend!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2004-10-13 01:07 AM

Thank all of you guys for the compliments. Yeah maybe it is a little redundant, but whatever. You guys are cool. Thanks.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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