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Dark Poetry #4

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spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

0 posted 2004-10-12 03:37 PM

As the dark shades of night
Decends into our plight
And the wars of our fight
Starts to ignight
I wonder if the sight
Of forces that unite
Has the might
Of a kite
And a fist holding tight
I wonder if its right
To end with the delight
Of a hight
That ends our blight
With a source of light
That remains ever bright
Am I starting to recite
Because I know its alright
And now I say good-night

hope you like it....

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-10-12 09:02 PM

Magnifico....yes, quite!
Took a lot of skill to pull this one off! Great job.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-10-12 10:56 PM

hehehe wow. This was awesome. You are very talented. I could have never done this....
If i could, it woudlnt make ANY sense whatsoever...

I really like this though

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

3 posted 2004-10-14 01:56 PM

Thanks guys. it was really just a ramble for me. it took a few minutes to do. but i'm glad you liked it.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

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