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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
I am so scared So scared of what is going to happen When you tell me That we're over Because I wake up for you I live at the prospect of you taking my hand And me feeling safe In your hold And I wake up for you I wake up to hope you smile when you see me To hope you sit next to me And warm my icy heart I will die when the day arrives When you rip my heart in two I will die because I will have nothing Nothing to live for Nothing to lift my spirits Nothing You are my world And I already know I am not yours And it kills me I love you with all my heart But I know you dont And im praying Day and night That you could But Im so scared For when the day arrives I will cry A thousand tears That have been locked inside For as long as I can remember And each tear Will be for you Each tear Will be for my memories Each tear Will rip me And tear me in two I am so scared *ramblings, bear with me. any comments are welcome* nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
It might never happen, and I hope it never does. Not as good as your others, but because your poems are as great as great can be, I still think this is a great poem. Now I'm just babbling, babble, babble, babble, babble. Oh, it makes me so sad, it's a sad poem Sophie, don't be scared, keep your nightlight on...ok? Although the light might scare away nasty under-bed monsters...hope it scares away the other monsters. Maybe (nameless) is your nightlight and your afraid (nameless)'ll have a power cut. Hehehe, this is getting fun. Sorry, for taking so much time to reply, this a lonnnnnnnnnnnnnng reply. Hollow. Courtney. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
love lost does truly hurt. it hurts worse when the one who leaves is still in love with you... so if the one leaving doesnt love you anymore, find the strength to carry on... and breathe deep girl |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
heya.... another brilliant poem...... i know what your saying and going thru coz its happening to me right now..... ne wayz this is beautiful, emotional and well another great poem from you darkness..... keep your head high, stay strong, keep pushin on keep on writing Mel live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
i also hope (nameless) and u will not ever be over. U guys r really good for each other and everyone can see that! but remember if it doesnt work out then i was never ment to.. and there r plenty other fish in the sea that u will love just as much great poem i thought it was just as good liked it lots LOR "When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..." |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
sigh thanx so much everyone for ur comments. i appreciate them. loveandempathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
"You can't sigh in detention!" Sorry, it was on recess. Had the urge. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
Ahhhhh jwebfhebhrwkjfnhkrjhfr -Bows- Amazing. Yes.. Amazing. Thank You. <3 Persephone.. I believe that lovers should be tied together and thrown into the ocean in the worst of weather and left there to drownin their innocence |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"I am so scared So scared of what is going to happen When you tell me That we're over" Woah. You totally read my mind and wrote it out. Thanks for sharing! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
Guess who? WOW what more can i say, *utterly speechless* (which is a first for me) loved it sooo much. keep writing more c yaz 2moro (L) R.I.P RIVER JUDE PHOENIX bex "I have a hard time keeping from drowning in this crazy buisness" - River Phoenix 1970-1993 |
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PeaceInEverything Junior Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 31Ohio, United States |
"You are my world And I already know I am not yours And it kills me" I know how this feels and it hurts both of us... I really appreciate you writing this rambling though you say it is. It says how I feel in the words that I do not have. Thank you. Empathy shall set us free. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Oh wow...i really loved this. I can relate also...and i know exactly how much it hurts...im still not over it, and it happened a little elss than a year ago..(pathetic huh) No, i mean, im over it in a way, but i still love him. A lot. Anyways, awesome write. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
this is really good. can't say i've felt it befor. haven't let anyone in far enough for them too take over my whole life. but i wish i could. you have a way with words. i felt the emotion behind this. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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