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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
It doesn't matter Don't try Stop your vanity maze of efforts Don't care Its not worth it Its not worth it With that sore diagonal machine Somewhat imbedded somewhere inside Ignore the pain Smash your defeated skull Its not worth it Its worthless Pointless Give up Loser Then you'll feel better Be happy Live it in sleep only Harness what was given Bouncing dangle above my head Dying for this Drained by this Surviving under this A short measure from losing this And comforted with this Surgically implanted desire The chemistry of me Built within Busted and surrounded by myself Make it stop Feel this pop That little bit of effort The vain struggle inside Explode Break it out He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow. This could apply to so many layers of life, I don't think I'll even begin an interpretation. But know that I read and understand and although it's kind of odd to say "enjoyed" to dark poetry, somehow I did, because I could relate. thanks gis |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"Stop your vanity maze of efforts" I'm gonna get a rubber stamp of this line (with your permission, Green) & plaster it in ruby red on all the idiotic foreheads of the obtuse! A Myriad of Ah, Yes!!! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Serenity and Nowhere said it best. Inspired me to write, so off I go! Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you everybody. I appreciate that serenity. That would be cool with me News, and I guess I'm off to read what you've written Courtney. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Can't forget it. His war is in the blood and guts of the soldier. In the mind and soul, and embedded in memory like a flashbacked acid trip. coyote  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah. Its hard to forget it. Actually if I was to ignore it til I die I'll always remember. It is music. It drives me freakin crazy. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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