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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-10-09 12:22 PM

In old age and wise friendly
His cigarettes have disappeared
The power
Transparent

Mumbo jumbo set up hault
Whats the story hidden in his heart?
Calm and slow intelligent
Watchful sip of cancerous toss

Childhood desire up against
Paper box world and cardboard trays
Smudged words
I hate you

Living capsul to the brim with poison
Blind honest refusal scratch
Eaten lies he's become
Simply confuse and deny

They wait for him
Red ready teeth
Stripped and dripping blood
Ravaged torn

Cricle light power do as will
Inserted love free to take
Ring his mind anew
Join the living few

Meditate
Recieve
Compress
Just
Let it flow

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-10-09 12:31 PM

You are indeed in rare form tonight, Craig. I guess I could pull out the lines "In old age and wise friendly" ... "what's the story hidden in his heart". But, then, it would digress from the obliteration in the rest of the incredible yet bleakly tortured write. You continue to amaze...

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

2 posted 2004-10-09 10:32 AM

wow... it's flowing, green! nice! the cigs are the vice i have yet to dispell...

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2004-10-09 08:42 PM

Thank you Purity. I appreciate that.

Thank you EveGnosis. Just let it flow. I hate cigarettes.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2004-10-10 08:28 PM

I would love to bite your neck, babe.

Old is not bad, lol.

coyotyl

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2004-10-12 12:12 PM

Love to bite my neck? Hmmm. A trickle of love desire. Almost incomplete and somewhat vanished. Thats what I see.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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