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Losing touch of friendship
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Losing touch of friendship |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
The lonelines pulses, Through my veins, As I stand on the Outskirts of the circle, Eyes glazed over, Faking interest, While my mind ticks over The sense of detachment. I look at you all, The people I once Called my friends, But to use this title Now, Would be a heinous joke. Such a mockery of the Very word, "FRIENDSHIP". "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Well then. That's a pity. I understand the feeling of detatchment....in fact, more than understand I know and it hurts. It hurts so bad. I would offer advice but....I can't think of anything. Hollow, Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
darling, this is about right now, i wrote this poem yesterday, relative to my life as it is...i am detached from everyone, never in my life have i felt so freaking lonely. "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
wow. you read my thoughts ive never felt so lonely either. but lifes life. thats my excuse. loved the poem btw, raw and angry LOR put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
oops, my reply was actually supposed to be in reply to the one you wrote in "loneliness" eek! oh well... "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
To borrow from one of the titles of a post here, "IT SCARES ME", vamp. I am with you in all sincerety. Loneliness kills... I know I have true friends, so I feel successful in that regard, but the power of loneliness crushes the niceties of anything else in your life. People become friends by being genuine, and by sharing their "all" with one another and still accepting and caring. This is probably the worst of cliches, and one you may not agree with, but you are among friends here at Passions, for you do indeed share a lot of your intimacies with us, and we love you for it...no judgements, no jokes. I have made some awesome friendships here! All of the musings aside, I value what you have to say, and I love how you share. This one was great as well, so hang in there! I'm with ya in this battle we call loneliness! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
oops, that reply wasnt for 'loneliness' either..holy macaroni? i like hallucinated something i thought you wrote, and then replied to it...but now its nowhere... *feels scared at self* the lone light, in a world of darkness. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful vamp..... im sorry i had missed this before... better late than neve tho hey... your writing is always beauiful and heart felt. your talent soars whenever you write and i too know the feeling of detachment... im like that every day.... keep the writing coming. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
I know how you feel, I used to be an outgoing person now I am a no-one. A very sincere poem. Very heartfelt by everyone here I am sure. Ben |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"while my mind ticks over the sense of detachment" made mine tick over and over again. positively loved it! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This poem is about lonliness and you have all these people replying basically telling you they are your friends and me too. I just thought I'd point that out. Great poem. And about what Purity said, thats why we call him purity. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
thanks everyone for the reply, craig's right..all the people on here are my friends, this is really such a supportive community..lol, now im going to stop myself, before i get lovey dovey and embarassing.. woah, *feels ignorant* is purity a guy? eek, i feel bad i thought you were a girl..sorry..sorry..sorry.. Just because you're paranoid, doesn't me they're NOT out to get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG, I felt like that for so long many many years before I woke up. Outskirts of the circle, Eyes glazed over, Faking interest, While my mind ticks over The sense of detachment. Nice writing V |
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