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Broken Freedom |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Breathing new air, hope fills your body Ready to start a new life, new places, new faces But as you take the ultimate first step Old ghosts emerge from the past Eerily haunting your thoughts Temptation strikes, its too hard to resist You are a mere charmed snake. Fall back into routine habits Contented first off, but your early urge returns, Like a wolves hunger for flesh, you taste it everywhere. Dare you attempt freedom once more? Stability at an all time high Can you surpass painful withdrawal? Ignore the delicious whispers in your ear? My future is undetermined, But I'm willing to try once more. "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
My future is undetermined, But I'm willing to try once more. butiful gud as kirsty! i really enjoy your writing hey do u hav msn? if u do add me im... laura_lee_loo at the normal addy put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
beautiful... im speechless...... its beautiful....... keep up the writin. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Yeah, tell me if u have msn. Wow, another powerful write. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
thanks for the comments guys. i do have msn, that i do. "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Add me Kirst, bubbly_o at hotmail. Thanks! Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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