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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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Higher and higher im falling higher and higher falling slower and slower making no progress to fit your definition limitation lets me crawl as far as you want me to go before its time to come back and serve your purpose for yet another day eyelids flutter moments shudder by just watching your face scorn grows anger shows as i cry falling deeper into your hate ambition of what i want or what i could be cut loose by your words bleeding and fading into your grasp lower and lower i'm growing lower and lower in your opinion im not here im not good enough im not worth it say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
Brilliant. I mean that. making no progress to fit your definition limitation lets me crawl as far as you want me to go !!! |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Loved the same bits as K. I like the higher and higher, lower and lower, at the beginning and end. It had a nice rhythm, a nice flowwwwwwwwwwww. Hm well yes. Hollow. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Laura? you are worth every bit, I have many people I would love to send this too *smile* |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
loved it every bit agree with what everyone sed here wow loveandempathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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