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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sketch Of Thought ~*Marge Tindal*~ Dark decline of shadows fall adumbrating in unison down bedroom wall Moving ... moving stealth-like they come Straining ... draining until it's all done~ Then in heap of shadowed keep into the darkness they creep creep creep~ adumbrate - AD-uhm-brayt, transitive verb 1. To give a sketchy or slight representation of, to outline. 2. To foreshadow in a vague way. 3. To suggest, indicate, or disclose partially. 3. To cast a shadow over, to shade, to obscure. ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
New word for me and how well it fits this write! Asia |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Oooo, very fun word. I shall have to remember it. If only English classes would present their vocabulary lists so enticingly. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i liked this write adumbrateively (sp??) hallows eve maybe... "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
You are always teaching us new words Miss Marge. I love it. Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Excellent use of a difficult word! Great job! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge. You did it again.  |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Awesome word. I'll add it to my list. I'm not normally one for long responses, so here's me thought: wahahaha! In a good way, though. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all so much~ I use www.dictionary.com Word Of The Day to jumpstart my writing. They don't all make it to a posting, but this one liked me~ Appreciate the replies~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
very nice I like this a lot thanx for sharing and the educating too  Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
nice write...love the new vocb. word i'll deff be using that one.!.! |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Excellent poem, Marge. The language was perfect; you really conveyed a shadowy atmosphere... *hugs* Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My thanks to you, Venus, for digging in the archived back pages of PiP, bringing it forward for comments~ Sometimes seeing something of my past writes inspires me to do even more~ So ... I'll most likely see if I can find that little dark muse and let him/her splash in my ink-of-think for something fresh~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Myshkin New Member
since 2006-07-25
Posts 6Perth, Australia |
A very nice poem... Shadows and thoughts - an interesting juxtaposition... how they flit in the night... I also like the creep creep creep - it gives the poem an almost childlike innocence while simultaneously realising something profound... I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing, than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance. |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
NP...was glad to find it and read some of your poetry...I find it most intresting Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Myshkin and Venus~ Belated thank you's for your nice responses~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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