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Take my Hand and See
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Take my Hand and See |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Take my hand and see, What you do to me. Take my hand and see, How happy our lives will be. Take my hand and see, How much you mean to me. Take my hand and see, We'll stand forever in unity. Take my hand and see, See that you set me free. Just take my hand to see, See how much you mean to me. So take my hand... I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do not think you would have to wait long for her (or any other woman! lol) to take your hand after reading this 'love'ly poem!   EA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Simply out...but powerfully felt...good job kid  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
for me, there is a lot of trust that must be had to take someone's hand...this poem sat well in me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snowflake, Enjoyed the read. |
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