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The Mule |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Mule I sutured my trail, downed the sail And in this cast, the past of bail For the future is no more, no less Then moments in moments address I buried my head recklessly Ferried in this astral sea And kissed ergo head and toe In the glow of my mystic sew It was a way to salve the sigh To valve the epoch of the why A double-edged sword, in swings To cut the fore and aft of things To borrow the now to thereafter Cut sorrow and raise the rafter To bide upon this jell of prime And mark it well in timeless time. And in this course, have lost the be And crossed a horse, with a donkey. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"For the future is no more, no less Then moments in moments address" Good Morning Sy and welcome to yesterdays future...  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Images abound in this write,Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic imagery in this wonderful write Sy! Tea's on...I'll pour.  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, Jack, ~'Ass'k me no questions, and I'll tell ya no lies! lol Thanks for my morning, ee-haw!!!   EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-09-2003 10:41 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It was a way to salve the sigh To valve the epoch of the why A double-edged sword, in swings To cut the fore and aft of things To borrow the now to thereafter Cut sorrow and raise the rafter To bide upon this jell of prime And mark it well in timeless time. ================================ I am moth giddy from all these internal rhymes and the clever banter... you are me king of cool verbiage and cadence.   Ya know what they say bout us Missouri mules dont ya LOL got the email...will write back shortly. *ww*    I can remember Forever December, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodmorning Seymour  I especially liked the ending part of your rhyme today.... And in this course, have lost the be And crossed a horse, with a donkey I love it!! Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I liked this a lot...exceptional writing sir! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Good one. Now about the horse crossed with the donkey. Me thinks that could be another peom.LOL See Ya Bon  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brad, Thanks for the well done. Duncan, The Mule has no future. LOL Thank you dear scorpio Nancy, You pour I'll drink. Hugs. Earth Angel, Thanks for the smile. Hugs JM, What ever they say I wouldn't like to be kicked by one. LOL WWRS vandana, Thank you dear. Eric, Thank you for the excellent. Ethel, And the mule thanks you. LeeJ, Thanks for the beautiful comment. Bonnie, Two mules do make a good team. LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I saw a burro, recently who brayed and brayed, incessantly, but when a hand strayed to his head, he brayed no more, and thus, was led.... ~*~ Smiling at you, m'friend... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine A delightful post. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, Your words are always so musical. Sometimes I have read them more than once to understand them because there is so much incredible imagery and music going simultaneously--your writes overwhelm my senses (but that's a good thing...) Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as always...enjoyed you Seymour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite Thank you for the wonderful comment. Passing, Your read is my pleasure. |
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