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Open Poetry #30

Without Any Trace

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-12-10 08:09 AM

I no longer pine
for what isn't mine.

The love of heart
well defined,
with valentine hearts
red, pulsing with feeling.

Why bother with that
when in fact what really,
enters reality in this

my space

is painted on happy
without any trace
or illusion of love.

WhiteRose 12/10/03

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-12-10 08:18 AM

my space

is painted on happy
without any trace
or illusion of love.

So honest and straight forward...a giving heart, humble yet most dedicated...you will be to anyone whose lucky enough to know you. Lovely write...filled with kindness, yet committment. Very much enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-12-10 12:27 PM

I often ask myself "why bother with that" too

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-12-10 12:32 PM

Hi Anne.

It's good to see you here.
With another excellent Poem, too.
Happy Holidays, sweet lady

Hugs,
Ethel

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-12-10 01:21 PM

It's sad, but so often true, that when we lower our expectations, there is less chance for disappointment.

You are a beauteous rose who should be treated as one!

Linda

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