Open Poetry #30 |
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"repeat" |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
"Repeat after me" Everyday is a repeat Every day is a repeat repeat, after me there is no hope when there is nothing to have faith in there is no faith when there is nothing to believe in there is no love when there is nothing to have faith in Repeat after me Everyline is a repeat Every line is a repeat of the one before, of the One before. Everyday is a repeat Every day is a repeat of the one before. Of the One, before. Everyline is a repeat. Every line is a repeat of the one before. Of the One before... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the way this doubles and triples back on itself, it leaves an impression. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Futility simply composed. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Interesting, no doubt...and thought provoking |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, I sure know this |
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