Open Poetry #30 |
Of Missing Stars... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
There’s something wrong! cried Terpsichore, It seems that Venus is no more, There’s just a hole where she’s to shine Our sparkling gem of vespertine. Perhaps she’s left and ran away, Or even worse, there’s been foul play. Perhaps a thief has stole her light, And carried her off into the night. The gods searched high and muses low, They asked each other, where could she go? The welkin sky was an empty place, Without the splendor of Venus’ grace. Then Orion the Hunter let out a yell, I’ve found the spot where Venus fell, It seems she’s down on planet earth, She’s been reborn, a human birth. I had to smile at gods on high, And at the muses in night’s sky, It was not Venus in my arms, No star could match your radiant charms. [This message has been edited by Tim (12-10-2003 08:35 AM).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is sooo cool! Loved it! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mr. Tim that Mrs. Tim is one lucky woman, having you write of her as you do, and these poems of yours make me believe that there is still love out there! Happy Holidays to you both. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice rhythm and message yep, agree with Mysteria |
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Imajica Junior Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 14NM, USA |
splendor "Is there a superintendent of the spaceship, Luke" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! I love this! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not missing at all, it seems... not if she is there, in your arms. Smiling.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Tim...she is one lucky lady! Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
!!!! |
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