Open Poetry #30 |
Konrad Calls.... |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Konrad Calls…. Paint me a poet, and one could show you imaginary characters, one, or two who live and breathe, oh yes, they do… and even if fictional, these masterful minds, they believe, oh they believe, in you and your kind. Poet you be. They shall take you on trips to a far away, show you a moment, or two, of life as it is, what it’s about, then whisper enticements, no need to shout. Some just say, “it’s the southern way” but oh, I think it’s something more, as I watched in awe and listened to winds that whispered in sly you’ll come, again before I had even reached a shore, for I knew I’d return to see this summons, this masterful summons, this calling summons, written on doors. You’ll come again, you’ll see me here in southern climes I am that near. Konrad has only been in my wandering fantasies, a voice on the wind, a real still unseen, and yet here he painted these skies in gold, whispering, Here now, behold! Do not conjecture, or think, just see what you feel, flicker your shutter, shudder your need, feel the wind murmur, in sounds soft and low see the gold heighten, now take things real slow… for I shall show you signs in the skies where beasts still remain just over there, for your eyes, but not all shall see them, as “all skies are the same”, but I shall show you, if you whisper my name. “Konrad,” the sound came silent to lips, a character, imagined, yet the name slipped close to the surface of water, and stayed, as before my eyes, a sight, displayed… and I looked into the eye of the creature, seeing all symbols so clear for all that I do, and hold, and think of, was near and I knew this adventure was all it should be, even if tomorrow was still held in shrouds of mystery. …to be continued…. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"for I shall show you signs in the skies where beasts still remain just over there, for your eyes, but not all shall see them, as “all skies are the same”, but I shall show you, if you whisper my name." Beautiful! I/we have waited so long it seems for you to return... and now..now this wonderful story to unfold before out eyes.. complete with pictures! Wonderful! Hugs~Nancy ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The glorious golden skies lend their beauty to this eldorado story... "to be continued" are three welcomed words! Linda |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...You enchant us with your words and delight with your photos...they are so alive with color, both of them. So good to have you back! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sunshine: Waiting expectantly for the next chapter. Beautiful photos and intriguing text! Like that new picture too!! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOOOOO HOOOOO... who is the hottie in the green dress??? ( I'll be back for the poem) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
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before I had even reached a shore, for I knew I’d return to see this summons, this masterful summons, this calling summons, written on doors. You’ll come again, you’ll see me here in southern climes I am that near. Konrad has only been in my wandering fantasies, a voice on the wind, a real still unseen, and yet here he painted these skies in gold, whispering, Here now, behold! Do not conjecture, or think, just see what you feel, flicker your shutter, shudder your need, feel the wind murmur, in sounds soft and low see the gold heighten, now take things real slow… for I shall show you signs in the skies where beasts still remain just over there, for your eyes, but not all shall see them, as “all skies are the same”, but I shall show you, if you whisper my name. ============================= talk about high inspire... your muse is singing these words... me thinks she cant be contained to a pen. I have to know.... where did you write this??? I can remember Forever December, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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quote: you bet your sweet winkies it is...yayaya |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Hello, Sunshine! It's great to see you again! Everything read so easily, but this, especially sang to me! Here now, behold! Do not conjecture, or think, just see what you feel, flicker your shutter, shudder your need, Sade |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm listening... splendid to have you back |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
You’ll come again, you’ll see me here in southern climes I am that near''' Indeed....I await the rest.... hugssssss ooohhhh YEAAAAAAAA!! Lauren~ ~~**~~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh you have me mesmerised Sunshinygirl. WOW! Have missed you dear and what a beautiful photo. Maree fate is not just |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
"flicker your shutter, shudder your need" I so love that bit... but the entire poem and presentation...ooohhh it just gives me goosebumps its so beautiful. Welcome home friend. You have indeed conjured up magnificence. I bow in your presence! Hugs, Caroline the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful...simply wonderful. Oooh, and a delightful new pic too! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Your time away did not dull your writing edge, but honed it to a form I've not seen. Beautiful photography!! You inject such a sense of feeling into your writing. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my goodnes!! Karilea, you have outdone yourself with this photography. You know that I love these pictures. Did you think of me when you took some of them? LOL Thank you so much for sharing them!! Hugs, Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You share so much through your poetry, Karilea. Sounds like you had a fabulous time, this is truly a snap shot worth every word. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
You yanked me into this and now I'm stuck inside it! Captured me, you did AWESOME poem. Went right with my mood this morning. I shall keep it. ^_^ I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
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"Paint me a poet, and one could show you imaginary characters, one, or two who live and breathe, oh yes, they do… and even if fictional, these masterful minds, they believe, oh they believe, in you and your kind. Poet you be." Ya know, I was expecting that seeing, being in these places would bring this character and storyline into focus for you Kari and I think it did just that. I've read this several times over the past couple of days. It settles in real well. Gotta love that in a story... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
and even if fictional, these masterful minds, they believe, oh they believe, in you and your kind. No doubt in my mind! This is spectacular in picture and word. Gosh, how I love that Konrad! He really is special. hehe!! Huggles, Marti .... continue ------> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Keepin' them together... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You’ll come again, you’ll see me here in southern climes I am that near" so excellent... "shudder your need, feel the wind murmur, in sounds soft and low see the gold heighten, now take things real slow… for I shall show you signs in the skies where beasts still remain just over there, for your eyes, but not all shall see them, as “all skies are the same”, but I shall show you, if you whisper my name." LOVE THIS PART tooo wonderful got goose bumps! |
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