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Open Poetry #30
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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
0 posted 2003-12-16 09:53 AM

You took me in,
Swallowed my heartbeat
And left my lips
To nothing
But yours.
Breathing nothing but your breath,
Hearing nothing
But your words,
I lifted my head from the quicksand,
Breathed my own air,
Kissed my own life,
And heard nothing
But the sound
Of my goodbye...
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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-12-16 10:03 AM

Whew...!!!

Incredible writing!

Eric
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-12-16 10:20 AM


That left a giant sucking sound!
Very good, KoKo....
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-12-16 10:23 AM


KoKO, vacuumed that emotional moment right up, didn't you?
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-12-16 10:24 AM

KoKo, you Rocko! You sure can writo, my l'il darlin'!

Lovin', appreciative huggums,
EA
P.S. And you will not only "Survive" ~ you will THRIVE!

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-16-2003 10:26 AM).]
KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
5 posted 2003-12-16 10:24 AM

Eric- Thank you!!

Sunshine- Is that a good thing??? lol

Thanks, you two. I appreciate your reading and commenting.
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
6 posted 2003-12-16 10:25 AM

Midnitesun & Linda-

Thanks, both of you! I appreciate it ~Hugs~
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