Open Poetry #30 |
Daring |
jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
I dared to touch the breath of time… To simply hold our sacred moment for one second longer. I dared to whisper the name of love… To divinely bless that fleeting second when we became One. This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like it was worth the risk! Pretty poetry, jaicie~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great opening stanza. Lovely poem |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ a divine breath of time! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes we all have to take risks... this is a beautiful write here jc |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Blues, steaven, EA, passing... Thank you for your wonderful comments. I truly appreciate them. Hope you each have a splendid holiday season. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful...simply beautiful. Love, Eric |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thank you, my dear... You know what it means coming from you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
oh gosh, how pretty is this... you have a beautiful heart and it shows! Happy Holidays, Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh, thank you, Amy... What a sweet comment! I wish you a warm and wonderful holiday as well. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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