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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
I open my arms to the abyss of the infinite I cry to the winds to set me free I open my heart to the ravages of time And the gift I receive… The beauty I perceive… …is me. This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
You have divined the wisdom of the ages. There is no freedom to love others, without first loving oneself. There is greater gift to receive than that of self-worth. Well written. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
steavenr... Thank you so much...now, I only wish I could "get" it!!! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
straight from the heart....excellent write! |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
And the gift I receive… The beauty I perceive… …is me. excellent. i am the creator i am the norisher i am the destroyer only i am and what else i see is my extension. |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
This was one of the most simple yet beautiful pieces I have ever read. I can't exactly articulate why, but this poem really struck a chord deep within me. I guess it's because my Truth is similar to yours.  Beautiful. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thank you all for your beautiful comments! passing...it's always a thrill for me when you leave a reply! ambrish...yes -- the "I am" is the basis for all, isn't it? Fire Fairy...what an absolutely gracious comment. It is always a pleasure when I can "touch" someone with my art. Thank you again... Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Jaicie114 -- you took me there kiddo! Great write! Happy New Year! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You touched and played beautiful secret chords here, dear jaicie. Wonderful. Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Jc...as always...polihsing the mirror! Love, Eric |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading this, jaicie. Hugs,  |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Iliana, Margherita, Eric, and Ethel... Thank you so much for your replies...I truly appreciate them. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jc...there is a huge amount of wisdom and truth within this small package. And it is so very true that what is important is simple....Love yourself first...and then you can love all others as well. Thanx! |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
And the gift I receive… The beauty I perceive… …is me. true, all search finally ends in one's inner self. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
inner beauty shines in your words of wisdom Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
YES! I LOVE THIS! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Magnus, ambrish, Hope, Dixie... Thank you all for your nice comments...I really appreciate them. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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