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Daniel van Vliet
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0 posted 2003-12-30 04:30 PM



K.....

K..... said "Don't loose hope"
K..... said "Believe in God"
K..... said "We have each other"
K..... said "I love you"
K..... said "Lets die together"
K..... said "Good-bye"
K..... said "I need you"
K..... said "Your so innocent"
K..... said "Nothing else matters"
K..... said "Let me kiss you"
K..... said "I wish you were here"
K..... said "I slept with him"
K..... said "I am sorry"
K..... said "Forgive me"
K..... said "Please, please"

K.....
I died for you,
and now each day
I'm dead without you.

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-12-30 04:33 PM


Quite a powerful presentation...left me dumb struck.  
A purging of the soul.

Hopeful for the mending. TD

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2003-12-30 04:44 PM


"I died for you, now each day I'm dead without you",,,the head of that nail,,,,stood no chance
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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3 posted 2003-12-30 05:49 PM


powerfully presented and said - you say it here!  Paul
SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-12-30 05:59 PM


OUCH!...that hurts! Just does. Left me with a lump in my throat. wow.
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

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