Open Poetry #30 |
K..... |
Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
K..... K..... said "Don't loose hope" K..... said "Believe in God" K..... said "We have each other" K..... said "I love you" K..... said "Lets die together" K..... said "Good-bye" K..... said "I need you" K..... said "Your so innocent" K..... said "Nothing else matters" K..... said "Let me kiss you" K..... said "I wish you were here" K..... said "I slept with him" K..... said "I am sorry" K..... said "Forgive me" K..... said "Please, please" K..... I died for you, and now each day I'm dead without you. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite a powerful presentation...left me dumb struck. A purging of the soul. Hopeful for the mending. TD |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
"I died for you, now each day I'm dead without you",,,the head of that nail,,,,stood no chance Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerfully presented and said - you say it here! Paul |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
OUCH!...that hurts! Just does. Left me with a lump in my throat. wow. Terri~ Well I will go down with this ship |
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