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blind love |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
I see the lady I love all the time, A glance through the window is all I need And it does not hardly cost me an dime To do this nasty, mischievous deed. I see her skin as she starts to undress, My gazes wish for her body to stay In my mind where I am free to caress Her loving flesh that yields to my hands which lay Upon her rosy cheeks which disappear When I awake from my dreak-like state And I am left in front of a broken mirror Small fractions of the man that I now hate. Love, I implore you to go from my mind. So, I can go off and leave you behind. the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
ooh. dreams can be harsh, this i know. but keep dreaming. you know what they say. if you dream something all the time it may come true.  It works you know!!Meg tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
beautiful and real...perhaps one because of the other. joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Written with passion .... but love wants to stay! Some dreams are healthy! Love, Margherita |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
A lovely and passionate write... always harash |
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