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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I remember when . . . we used to spend two weeks up at Black Lake every summer my parents and I rented a cabin next door to my grandparents with my aunt and uncle on the other side my cousins and I played volleyball on the beach in the warm sand while our parents and grandparents watched my cousin and I would go fishing with my dad or my uncle each day until we were old enough to go ourselves we'd all get together and have a barbeque or a bonfire at dusk on the beach just enjoying each other's company sometimes we'd go to my aunt and uncle's cabin with friends from up and down the beach for a sing along while my uncle played his guitar these scenes play in my mind today the pictures are as clear as they were years ago as I reflect upon the past knowing the future I remember when . . . life life was fun and carefree when we lived and laughed together ==================================================== This poem is dedicated to my Uncle Lee, who is in the hospital dying of cancer. It has spread to his kidneys, lungs, and back. There is nothing more they can do for him now except make him as comfortable as possible. Uncle Lee, thanks for the great memories. I will never forget them or your wry sense of humor. "When your life is tossed and turning And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (12-22-2003 09:07 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these are the best kinds of memories to have. . . the ones that stay with you always. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hugs to you... What a beautiful gift to have so many good memories. TD |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
My prayers go out to "Uncle Lee." Sweet memories of life, may you hold onto them! pictureme :-) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My heart goes out to you and your family. This is a rough time of year to go through this. I hope his pain eases soon. Your memories are beautiful. |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Lone Wolf, These are beautiful memories that you expressed well. Just remember your uncle will always be with you no matter what.  Hugs to you and your family, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW, as always you touch me. I'm sending angel wings and heart hugs your way. God bless you and your family. These are beautiful memories, that will always last. Happy Holidays, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jenn, you and your family are in my prayers. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful writing of memories from your heart...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
funny to read this enjoyable piece tonight. My wife and I were sitting after dinner saying --- remember when - - - we were young and our relatives would all crash after eating and we wanted to do nothing but run and play and have fun, not SLEEP!, but they wanted to ... crash and burn. It was always so boring! And now, gee whiz, I think the tables are turning... jwesley |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
My thoughts are with you both. Hold on to the memories my friend, take care! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
I am sorry about your Uncle. You honor him well by caring so much for him as shown through your writings. I'm sure he thinks the same of his nephew. You write with strength through your love for him. God Bless you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Those memories will be with you always...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know the feeling Jennifer, though my sister isn't into that stage yet (it will be the next stage)...and we are making all the "now" memories we can together. Hoping you can have some peace and happiness throughout this next year. Maureen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Holding onto those memories will keep him with you forever. Enjoyed the sharing, and wishing you and the family peaceful moments. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lone I am sorry to hear this ....I hope you are ok...this is hard especially during Christmas.... My love and hugs I send to your heart! If you need me I am here! your friend ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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