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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-12-01 05:11 PM

giving up the
will to care...

giving in to
no one there...

spirit spilled from
shattered glass of
circumstance that
dictates
chance is
dying in the
aftermath
of
time

~Vicky L. Raynes

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2003-12-01 05:35 PM

Vicky...So sad...I hope you are okay. Hugs to you, my friend!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-01 05:41 PM

Vicky, this is very sad. But,
it is written beautifully.
Hugs to you, sweet lady,

Ethel

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2003-12-01 06:56 PM

Vicky, this is sad. I feel this way myself.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-12-01 06:58 PM

Hauntingly sad Vicky..hope all is well.
Heart hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-12-01 07:05 PM

vlraynes
Sad but excellent wrie.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-12-01 07:19 PM

Vicky~
Hi lil buddy~

You write the emotions like no one else can~
Poignancy that reaches in and squeezes the heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-12-01 07:25 PM

Can understand the emotions spilled here.
Well written, and clearly expressed.
Hugs,
TD

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-12-01 08:52 PM

ticking . . .

finger tip to rim

chinggggg

silent echo of
crystal crush
of heart

once held
in finger
grip

now strewn

lying

embittered

Vic
Love you
(sorry this just popped out)
xxoo

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-12-01 09:02 PM

Vicky - time is fleeing, but the rainbow is there...

BC

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2003-12-01 09:08 PM

Martie...thank you, my friend...just one
of those days...I'm okay...but thank you
for caring.  Hugs back to you.

Ethel...thank you much, lady.  Hugs back!

Smartchick...sorry you feel this too.  Thank you.

Nancy...thank you, my friend.  Heart hugs back to you.

Sy...thanks so much, my friend.

Marge...hugs back to you...thank you.

TD...thank you, my friend.  Glad you like it.

Sue?...smile...don't you EVER apologize for
replying to one of my poems with a poem.
I absolutely adore it when you do that...
and?...what you wrote?...beautiful...
Thank you, my sis...you've given me a much
needed smile tonight.  Love you too...

Bill...thank you for the kind words, my friend.

Thanks again, everyone.
Hugs to all,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-12-01 10:45 PM

(big hugggsssssss) It hurts me deeply to see ones own pain or ordeal crush one to the point that all faith is lost in ones heart, dearest friend, I have been through so much and I understand grappling with faith and am only so blessed I haven't been a victim of eternal despair! (sad sigh) I send prayers out to all these such people, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-12-02 12:06 PM

Dear Ms. Vicky, I know that you are one who would not "surrender" even though you may feel like it at times. You are just too full of spirit and the Unsinkable Molly Brown attitude to ever give up the fight! You my dear, are a surviver! ~ and you are VERY SPECIAL!!!!!

Loving hugs,
Linda

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

13 posted 2003-12-02 09:42 AM

There's no middle...a very short poem either fails completely or it hits so hard...like this one does!

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dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

14 posted 2004-01-20 10:40 PM

your poet is surely taking advantage of your emotional state in this one....she write very awesome-like...

I've felt like this...can feel each word...

enjoying reading you...

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2004-01-20 11:03 PM

Vlraynes -- Billiant writing! Brava!

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