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Open Poetry #30

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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-01-20 07:04 PM

come to a place where you can
see me bare all the insanity
and despair

Listless and ignored
so fearless yet
unexplored on going
things very unsure

pots are melting
the ground is
trembling something
is near intimate
me so more show
me the final score

burn popcorn on the
stove old chinese food
in the fridge. doesnt look
like as if i been here
before.

Lights are out
tv flickers on
and off as i
seep into my
own thoughts.

"Fresh out the oven guy's even I dident read it yet I just write read later LoL"

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-01-20 07:15 PM

you been peekin into my fridge? LOL, I had something last week in the back of my fridge that I didn't recognize, so out into the trash it went, didn't even bother to take off the lid
LOL, a fun write

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

2 posted 2004-01-20 07:20 PM

Lights are out
tv flickers on
and off as i
seep into my
own thoughts.

I know this place...I'd love to slip off there right now. I will this eve, and I will remember your words when I do.

Excellent write.

Patricia

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-20 07:21 PM

Sounds like maybe you need a vacation!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2004-01-20 10:48 PM

haha im leaving for florida soon

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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