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The Firmament |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
We lay as one together …beneath a midnight sky, Beside a campfire’s embers, …as slowing flames did die, Nary a word was spoken, …no sound but night’s reprise, A whispered wind, a distant loon, …beneath the starlit skies, Then through the vastness of the night, …in suddeness did race, A shooting star ‘cross heaven’s vault, …then gone without a trace. It was as if a skipping rock …had creased a placid pond, Then disappeared into dark depths, …to seek what lies beyond. I felt the beating of your heart, …I heard your gentle sigh, As one we lay in silent awe, …beneath a midnight sky. [This message has been edited by Tim (11-29-2003 11:29 AM).] |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
Beautiful Tim..Beautiful it brings nack pleasant memories. Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just like a song... nice write |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
sweet and simple but elaborate in its own way. wow u make the combination of nature and love more wonderful than it already is. i see a camping trip in your future... Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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Inuwindow Junior Member
since 2002-08-29
Posts 12 |
Such a wonderful poem you've penned here, more poets here need to get a taste of it.  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
im glad this one was booted back up to the top! a loving sweet flow of words! |
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