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another way out |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I am stealing from your car Why I want the excitement I want to live How can you live from this Give me something else Give me life Give my brain life Give me money Give me parents Who cares |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*i do* but unfortunately i cant be mom to the world, so i start with my son and hope it grows to something bigger....cause i truly do care. |
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Essential Distress Junior Member
since 2004-01-22
Posts 33 |
nice opening line... really attention grabbing. and it does highlight how easy it is to think that no one cares, or just ignore the carers... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I was trying to highlight how someone with a good brain stands in a milk queue for a bun and milk; cant afford the clothes and has to lead a life where all you can con is all you have; where a prison is a short step from a policeman's easy cop I am not soft on crime but how many dont have a way out I joined the Royal Navy at 16 - cursed and fought it all the way but if anyone ever said to me "National Service" I would say "NO" in the services and "Yes" as a Civilian because "like needs like" and maybe 8 times around a parade ground is a start Dave |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I am wrong in my statement of someone with a good brain - anyone should have a chance - I spoke in the theme of what I was writing and I practised the attitude that I shouldn't have done All people have the right, no matter what, to develop their lives and aspirations I apologise Dave |
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