Open Poetry #30 |
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I Have Toes |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state ![]() |
Equipped with toes on my feet and days to walk more I'll witness victory and defeat sail to distant shores. They comforted me when I sojourned in a crib filled my mouth with digits when I needed a bib, instructed to count on toes and fingers the joy of tallied toes was not to linger. With then I could balance my weight on a favorite stool, at a tender age, pantry biscuits would make me drool; I'd still have my quota of five on each leg exposed in summers, or shielded in shoes instead. Now at a distance of so many years a knock on one toe caused me some fear a careless hit while seated in my lion legged tub made me appreciate again those digits I'd scrub. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-29-2003 01:30 AM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
The words stubbing my toe kept coming to mind...Ouch...hehe...I would never have thought to write about this subject, but I did hear one time without your big toe you can't stand. I don't know why I told that? Shrugs shoulderz? ![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() [This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-29-2003 02:26 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thinking about toes in a scientific way...well, I guess we really do need them afterall |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Hahahaha...great write! Eric |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
toes are important. for u, friend, they hold many memories. the more toes the better!!! hmm... maybe I'll have kids with SEVEN toes! Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Toes are great... there's just something about them hehe (or maybe I'm just strange) ![]() Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Finding out that there's so much to write about the stuff we take for granted..thanks all |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
shaking my head and smiling... you just reminded me of a lovely memory. I was sitting with my Dad once, and I had casually propped my feet, ankles crossed on his knee. We sat there quietly, both of us staring at my feet. Whereupon he broke the silence, making an obvious reference to my monkey type toes (I have this huge gap between my big toe and my first "little toe" which made me quite dextrous at climbing trees in my day)and he said, in his lovely Texan drawl: "Yanno? You could fit a whole 'nuther toe a'tween them two." I smiled with pride until he continued: "Tain't natural." You are so right Martin. It's the little things that make poetry. ![]() |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
well then you have a set of special toes...the better to climb with, I mean ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I had to read this if only because the title reminded me of PIP's Toe... and I thoroughly enjoyed! *S* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
reminders are good to have then ![]() |
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