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Open Poetry #30

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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-11-28 11:32 PM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-11-28 11:37 PM

you my dear are one amazing writer.....!!!

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2003-11-28 11:41 PM

and you, always make me feel like
i'm doing something right.

thank you for that !!

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-11-29 09:09 AM

oh wow
it made me squrm away... but want more.
I like it...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-29 01:22 PM

awesome...purely awesome!

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

5 posted 2003-11-29 01:26 PM

wicked awesome!! pain is beautiful. hardly any of us realize this anymore but u hit it right on the nail and reveal your pain to the world. i wish i had your courage. and your way with words wouldn't hurt either!

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2003-11-29 07:12 PM

thank you all for taking the time to read and comment.
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

7 posted 2003-12-03 10:54 AM

great job....looked really shnazzy with the picture too

I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed-

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