Open Poetry #30 |
Facing The Facts |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You call I'm alone I get thrilled to the bone you talk I listen bout our kids my weekend Chorus: Facing the facts hating the answers like isn't love you don't miss me much hope isn't truth prayers aren't promises livin in the past I'm out of touch hoping you'll come back But I'm ....facing the facts The life I missed is gone now it's me alone a man let you slip through my hands Chorus: Facing the facts hating the answers like isn't love you don't miss me much hope isn't truth prayers aren't promises livin in the past I'm out of touch hoping you'll come back But I'm ....facing the facts Bridge: I didn't see what I had to do I looked at you but missed the truth You needed love not compromise You gave me chances I gave you lies Chorus: Facing the facts hating the answers like isn't love you don't miss me much hope isn't truth prayers aren't promises livin in the past I'm out of touch hoping you'll come back But I'm ....facing the facts There I go bluesing it up again...... Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great lyrics! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
blues on! blues on! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome That's about as good as you can sing it. Enjoyed |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Eric, I love it when you "sing"..this is just awesome and would would be so cool put to music! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! You rock, dearest friend, I could hear this like either a blues or country rocker and I seriously hope you are getting yourself heard, sweet friend, you have true music soul in your blues blood, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Facing the facts hating the answers like isn't love you don't miss me much hope isn't truth prayers aren't promises livin in the past I'm out of touch Am I ever living this....really nice Ethome. Hey, you said one time you were going to write a Blues Serenade, this could be it! Such a sad song, but you do write awful nice. Take care of you, good poet~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
ethome, I liked the way you formatted this--good job! Sadelite |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Interesting lyrics of the sort of stuff that reminds of what Eric Clapton writes, haven't read your stuff in a while, my best to you for the upcoming season! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
fantastic ...aint nothing gets it out the system like singing the blues !!!and you did it perfectly Hope |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a sad song from you Eric... |
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