Open Poetry #30 |
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Stowed Away |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Stowed Away Tenderly I stowed away The tender of a tender day A chrysalis of hearts delight The aggregate of proselyte Bound within a womb of love As winsome as a turtle dove It brought a sigh unto my breath And will until my final death It was a moment of conceive A moment of a loves believe Moment lighting up the dark A moment of a lights embark That sailed within a sea of rhyme That anchored on the beach of time Built a castle in the air Waved a flag of youthful dare And here it wills a trinity That stays in our eternity. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, good morning! That sailed within a sea of rhyme That anchored on the beach of time Built a castle in the air Waved a flag of youthful dare I resonate with this ... it's very beautiful. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It was a moment of conceive A moment of a loves believe Moment lighting up the dark A moment of a lights embark ~*~ The perfect sentiment for such a wonderful day, Sy. Thanks! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"That sailed within a sea of rhyme That anchored on the beach of time Built a castle in the air Waved a flag of youthful dare And here it wills a trinity That stays in our eternity." Morning Sy! Ah this made me smile big time.. especially the above lines. Great waking up to your words. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Another gem Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In this our eternity dwells as rising heart beats, swells. Until the time of a last gasp a golden ring, a locket clasp. And on the dawn of waking day a mentor lives to softly say Is but a moment dreaming born that lives forever new, untorn. Beautifully expressive words Sir Sy. Thank you for them. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, You got me! I was determined to be grouchy today, but you got me! Thank you for your uplifting poetry. "It was a moment of conceive A moment of a loves believe" This has such a pretty flow and picture. ~Sadelite~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
::sigh:: This is truly magical...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
like music to my ears... a beautiful poem! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Such sweet writing this morning! Have a great day!..........jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you dear. Sunshine Thank you love. Nancy, You are a doll. ![]() scorpio Thank you sweet. Magnus You had a whole poem going there. Well done and thank you. Sadelite, Glad I could be of some help. LOL jaicie114, Beautiful comment, thank you. Neeraja, Thank you love. iliana, Thanks for the read and like. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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