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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-01-24 07:06 AM


Stowed Away

Tenderly I stowed away
The tender of a tender day
A chrysalis of hearts delight
The aggregate of proselyte

Bound within a womb of love
As winsome as a turtle dove
It brought a sigh unto my breath
And will until my final death

It was a moment of conceive
A moment of a loves believe
Moment lighting up the dark
A moment of a lights embark

That sailed within a sea of rhyme
That anchored on the beach of time
Built a castle in the air
Waved a flag of youthful dare

And here it wills a trinity
That stays in our eternity.



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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-01-24 08:27 AM


Dear Seymour, good morning!

That sailed within a sea of rhyme
That anchored on the beach of time
Built a castle in the air
Waved a flag of youthful dare


I resonate with this ... it's very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-01-24 09:15 AM


It was a moment of conceive
A moment of a loves believe
Moment lighting up the dark
A moment of a lights embark

~*~

The perfect sentiment for such
a wonderful day, Sy.  Thanks!

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-01-24 09:15 AM


"That sailed within a sea of rhyme
That anchored on the beach of time
Built a castle in the air
Waved a flag of youthful dare

And here it wills a trinity
That stays in our eternity."

Morning Sy!
Ah this made me smile big time..
especially the above lines.
Great waking up to your words.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2004-01-24 09:21 AM


Another gem Sy!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Magnus
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5 posted 2004-01-24 09:33 AM


In this our eternity dwells
as rising heart beats, swells.
Until the time of a last gasp
a golden ring, a locket clasp.

And on the dawn of waking day
a mentor lives to softly say
Is but a moment dreaming born
that lives forever new, untorn.

Beautifully expressive words Sir Sy.
Thank you for them.

Sadelite
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6 posted 2004-01-24 09:33 AM


Sy,
   You got me!  I was determined to be grouchy today, but you got me!  Thank you for your uplifting poetry.

"It was a moment of conceive
A moment of a loves believe"
                
This has such a pretty flow and picture.

             ~Sadelite~

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
7 posted 2004-01-24 10:36 AM


::sigh::  

This is truly magical...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Neeraja
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8 posted 2004-01-24 10:59 AM


like music to my ears... a beautiful poem!
iliana
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9 posted 2004-01-24 02:12 PM


Such sweet writing this morning!  Have a great day!..........jo
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-01-24 03:11 PM


Margherita
Thank you dear.

Sunshine
Thank you love.

Nancy,
You are a doll.

scorpio
Thank you sweet.

Magnus
You had a whole poem going there.
Well done and thank you.

Sadelite,
Glad I could be of some help. LOL

jaicie114,
Beautiful comment, thank you.

Neeraja,
Thank you love.

iliana,
Thanks for the read and like.


passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2004-01-25 01:05 AM



Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-01-25 08:12 AM


passing,

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