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Open Poetry #30

Poetic Escape

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

0 posted 2004-01-05 04:44 PM

Poetic Escape

A poet cries alone in his paradise
  The sandy white beaches he created
    With his coarse, honest words

Salty waters transformed
  From the tears of heartache and passion
    Crash in troubled waves

While his eyes burn
  With the intensity of the ceaseless Sun

Pebbles of thought are lost in the mix
  Of the unknown certainty

The clouds have left the sky
  But now lurk closer to home

He left the world behind
  But now there’s no where to go

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2004-01-05 04:45 PM

i love you.
i also adore this poem.

-hugs and kisses-
katie

P.S. hang in there sweetie!

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

2 posted 2004-01-05 04:46 PM

Excellent! I would give you a critique but I love it just the way it is...very creative.

MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

3 posted 2004-01-25 03:01 AM

How come you never told me about this one? I really like it... Save it. (P.S. Pink Floyd was still better than Nirvana)

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix

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