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Snow
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0 posted 2004-01-23 01:30 PM





"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-01-23 01:42 PM



Oh...my.

Wow.

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2 posted 2004-01-23 02:25 PM


I really have to disagree...it's the curves that do me in every time.
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3 posted 2004-01-23 04:06 PM


fantastic. simply fantastic.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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4 posted 2004-01-24 01:59 AM


I must confess...I truly wish I understood this one better...I have read it many times...perhaps I should try with a freshened mind
Snow
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5 posted 2004-01-24 02:13 AM


steavenr....

sometimes, it's more important to simply, feel.
thanks so much for all the comments.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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6 posted 2004-01-24 04:10 AM


whoa! sweet!
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7 posted 2004-01-24 06:29 AM


I don't ususally say this - but, superb.

You have talent.

K

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