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Urban Nightmare |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
Urban Nightmare Tottering he turns the light on Not sure if he's ready for another day, so lone again Bad dreams at night, urban nightmares at day No time for sad lament, no time for searching a way absent Astonishing buildings, no space to breath Among such feelings, life is not easy to live way out Time stops as he looks so many times to his watch Day and night trying to understand what pieces to match fight Another wasted day without a guiding light without a challenge, without an aim He turns off the light, goes to the lonesome bed knowing that tomorrow he's got to be ready to shave again Hello people...I've signed up to this place a couple of years ago and I now decided to put some poetry in here, but I feel like I have to say some things. First of all, my mother language is not english unlike the large majority of people here as far as I was able to realize, and all I had was 3 school years of english language so I beg you to pardon my errors, and feel free to correct me.I would even appreciate  Second thing...greetings from Portugal Keep poetizing!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! We've been WONDERING when you'd post! So happy to have you aboard, finally! As for English not being your first language, you could have fooled me! Well done! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
You writing is clear and simple, yet deep in meaning. I liked it. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to passions and please feel free to ask for help! Thats what we are here for! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
First, welcome to PiP. Your debut poem was outstanding, and your English is superb. My son-in-law's second language is English and I am amazed at times at his deep level of knowledge in it. You, too, seem to be blessed the same way. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NN~ Well, a hearty WELCOME to you for this great first post~ AND ... greetings to Portugal from Florida~ Will look forward to reading more of you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Welcome nn... I enjoyed your first poem |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Your English is amazing..and I love your first post. Greetings to Portugal from Canada! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~  ~*~ In your light I learn how to love In your beauty how to make poems You dance inside my chest where no one sees you and that sight becomes art |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
~WELCOME~ and i enjoyed your first post..hope you'll be back more often! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions!  Glad you came back...keep writing and sharing! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is one of the best pieces I've read here tonight....because of it's clarity. You use your knowledge of English well, nn.  K |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Welcome back to Passions! Your writing is evident of the poet that dwells within...just fantastic imagery here. McLean |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
Sheesh....thank you all for the kind words. And thanks for the nice postcard too. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big angel hugs) WOW...you've been here longer than I have, and by golly I'm so happy you've decided to begin sharing your voice with us all, yay! This is a most precious debut, I send angel hugs across the heartland of America and the Atlantic to you in Portugal, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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