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Justbleu
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0 posted 2004-01-22 04:00 PM


Caress
Feathery light
Under the gentle breeze
Endless wonder at the warmth of rays
An ease in the peace of the shadow near
Thoughts skip behind to other times
While petals stare at heaven
A splash of tears
Caress

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


© Copyright 2004 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2004-01-22 04:04 PM


just beautiful
~smiling~
M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-01-22 04:15 PM


Beautiful Bridgette!
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

richard taylor
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3 posted 2004-01-22 04:17 PM


Hi Justbleu,
to return the complement I looked at this as I have not read many of your poems [its hard to keep up here it being so fast] I realy found this excellent a very fine piece of writing thanks for sharing.
take care richard.

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2004-01-22 04:25 PM


hmm...this one is warm...pleasant

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5 posted 2004-01-22 06:57 PM


Left me with a great feeling ....  *S
ice
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6 posted 2004-01-22 08:17 PM


Begining and ending in a caress...a well chosen word...in a well worded poem..this is just lovely....:-)
enjoyed
________ice  
  ><>

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Gaia
7 posted 2004-01-22 08:21 PM


the imagery was perfect
a gentle caress, well done
Bridgette
thanks for sharing this poetic caress!

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8 posted 2004-01-22 08:56 PM


enjoyed
Justbleu
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9 posted 2004-01-22 11:33 PM


Thank YOU!!!!

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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10 posted 2004-01-24 05:28 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is downy soft beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart grow wings of happiness that forever are speckled by the sunshine of joy, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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