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Caress (Rictameter)
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Caress (Rictameter) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Caress Feathery light Under the gentle breeze Endless wonder at the warmth of rays An ease in the peace of the shadow near Thoughts skip behind to other times While petals stare at heaven A splash of tears Caress "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just beautiful ~smiling~ M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bridgette! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
Hi Justbleu, to return the complement I looked at this as I have not read many of your poems [its hard to keep up here it being so fast] I realy found this excellent a very fine piece of writing thanks for sharing. take care richard. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
hmm...this one is warm...pleasant  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Left me with a great feeling .... *S |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Begining and ending in a caress...a well chosen word...in a well worded poem..this is just lovely....:-) enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the imagery was perfect a gentle caress, well done  Bridgettethanks for sharing this poetic caress! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank YOU!!!!  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is downy soft beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart grow wings of happiness that forever are speckled by the sunshine of joy, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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