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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2004-01-23 09:16 AM

Layered Moments

Layered moments
  labored movements
Time slows
  nature sleeps
Buried deep within
  the snow
Remnants of yesterday
  seeds for tomorrow
Another seasoned wrinkle
  reminds me
not to stand still..

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-23 09:28 AM

"Another seasoned wrinkle
reminds me
not to stand still.."

...forever moving forward, dont waste a moment....

much enjoyed

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-01-23 10:40 AM

good to see you posting....this is lovely...hugssss

lauren~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-01-23 11:13 AM

"Another seasoned wrinkle
reminds me
not to stand still.."

Loved those lines...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2004-01-23 11:18 AM

"Another seasoned wrinkle
reminds me
not to stand still.."

I, too, loved these last few lines...excellent ending to a well-written poem.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-23 11:35 AM

SimplyGold~
This is just a lovely, lovely read this morning~
Good to see you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

6 posted 2004-01-23 11:37 AM

Ya, life is non-stop, only death is still.

Laoha's Pen

Chinapoet

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2004-01-23 11:43 AM

SG

HI, good to see you again.
A beauty you grace us with in this!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-01-23 11:45 AM

"Remnants of yesterday
seeds for tomorrow
Another seasoned wrinkle
reminds me
not to stand still.."

So good to see you posting again!
And this piece is simply wonderful.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-23 12:34 PM

I'm good at standing still...sometimes we all need a boot in the behind

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

10 posted 2004-01-23 01:34 PM

Thank you all for replying. I will be reponding to each of you as soon as I can snatch a little time.

SG

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2004-01-24 05:51 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, I'm so happy to see you again, dearest Electra, always look ahead and let the sunshine become part of your eyes! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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