This Moment, So Intimate (requested repost)

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This Moment, So Intimate (requested repost)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2004-01-22 12:12 PM

Hearts whisper in the dark
loving tones soothe
releasing more
than what the body needs~
surpassing what the soul desires.

Entwined in rythmic thoughts
time of tender savored
engraved on eternal walls
of memories.

Lovers heat burns
lighting hearts of passion,
touching
more than just mere
serendipitous pleasures
each second spent in cherish~

this moment, so intimate

when two hearts
lie together cradled
in the haven
of our love....

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-22 12:24 PM

thanks for the reminder...it's been a long time since I've known that

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-01-22 12:39 PM

So very beautiful Donna...
A keeper for sure!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-01-23 08:54 AM

Dixie and Nancy thanks so much
Good morning!

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

4 posted 2004-01-23 10:06 AM

Your work is captivating and so beautifully put to song. Thank you for sharing this!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-23 12:24 PM

GentlestLittleSpirit~
And thank goodness for the request to repost ... this is so tenderly moving~
A beauty sweet poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2004-01-24 05:44 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, you always build a nest of love with all your poetry, sweet friend, may sweet sparrow songs always chirp from it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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