Open Poetry #30 |
Friendly Insanity Pleas Divide ( Choose Wise Your Cause) |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
No Friend of mine This troubled soul Embraced by some As one who is whole I see jagged breaks of sanity Delusions grand Wrapped round the fingers Of some paranoia hand I pity the grip Held so tight to Him A cover for all The wrongs and whims Feed not the behavior Of such spiteful deceit For it grows roots among us And leads to defeat No friend of mine with irrational lies insanity rules some people’s lives Be careful I’m told Whose words you embrace Those who are ill And unreasonable faiths Lead us to harm The things we admire And all will end up In some quagmire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
AMEN!!!!!!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ron, wow, powerful write! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Capt., I had to throw out someting on these blue pages to let you know that your poem was appreciated. Don't know what to say except I read it a couple of times, and thought it was thought provoking and terrific. Sadelite |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Feed not the behavior Of such spiteful deceit For it grows roots among us And leads to defeat ~*~ Wise words. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is a very powerful message |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Feed not the behavior Of such spiteful deceit For it grows roots among us And leads to defeat'''' ~~ sad when some fuel the fires that long should have died down or at least been stomped....powerful statement and message.... ~*~ In your light I learn how to love In your beauty how to make poems You dance inside my chest where no one sees you and that sight becomes art |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You've hit the nail on the head with this one sir!!! Well done! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
quagmire is right. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
You do have a way of saying what needs to be said... Well done, sir. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes we judge too harshly. Aren't we all a little crazy at times? love ya mister. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I take back everything I said. You are right. After all I am just a grasshopper. Still love ya though. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Well stated, my friend!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very powerful write Captain. Quite thought provoking. Well done. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Wrapped round the fingers Of some paranoia hand" I must be crazy. All I keep wondering is what's the other hand doin'? :notworthy: (shush, you, I'll worship whom I please.) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Feed not the behavior Of such spiteful deceit For it grows roots among us And leads to defeat" Ah...the root that feeds the tree...well written, powerful. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ Yikes ! That's a real hair-raiser~ 'Be careful I’m told Whose words you embrace' Oh my ... how correcta munda is this ? So nice to see your words of pure wisdom so poetically stated~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Feed not the behavior Of such spiteful deceit For it grows roots among us And leads to defeat Excellent write. You are so correct, hating is defeating!!! As if to ask the question who shall cast the first stone and who amonst you judges lest ye be judged yourself. Excellent wisdom sir!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Amen!! "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
why must we choose? at all? |
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