| Open Poetry #30 |
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The Divorce |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Our bed, pink Silent sheets still lay Unwrinkled Alone |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*oh dont i know* ![]() ~hug~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
The shortness of this one adds to its power. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Muted - thank you. I obviously caught the mood I was trying to - hugs back to you. (I haven't actually experienced it though) Pilgrimage - thank you; I'm trying to show instead of tell. It's tricky |
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