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Copperbell
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0 posted 2004-01-23 02:52 PM



Our bed, pink
Silent sheets still lay
Unwrinkled
Alone

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muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2004-01-23 03:00 PM


*oh dont i know*


~hug~

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2004-01-23 04:15 PM


The shortness of this one adds to its power. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Copperbell
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3 posted 2004-01-23 04:53 PM


Muted - thank you.  I obviously caught the mood I was trying to - hugs back to you.
(I haven't actually experienced it though)

Pilgrimage - thank you; I'm trying to show instead of tell.  It's tricky

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