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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2004-01-22 02:38 PM

Broken pieces tucked away
entwined fibers and textures
and dried leaves
woven into the dark.

There are no shadows on demand
or right angles at dusk
unforeseen through the trees
there is only the quiet sound
of heart beats, nesting nightly.

Until the moon sparks the earth
and lights the fire in my eyes
then I shall fly willingly
feeding from the palm of your hands.

Taking refuge in silent tributaries
as the snow melts
running off down a stream
and overflows into pools
where the birds bathe in Spring~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-01-22 02:40 PM

Until the moon sparks the earth
and lights the fire in my eyes
then I shall fly willingly
feeding from the palm of your hands.

Bluesy....you have done it again...
left me speechless. Love this

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-01-22 02:44 PM

"Taking refuge in silent tributaries
as the snow melts
running off down a stream
and overflows into pools
where the birds bathe in Spring~"

Beautiful...took the bite out of winter
with this wonderful piece Bluesy!
~Warm hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-01-22 02:52 PM

nicely done...

I am more than ready for the spring thaw... and for days warmed by something other than the weak eyed sun of January

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2004-01-22 03:03 PM

Lovely, Bluesy!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-01-22 04:59 PM

nicely done..althoug I don't think our snow wants to melt at all *s

and the only birds I heard were Geese flying in circles not knowing which direction to go ...

M

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-01-22 05:23 PM

Lori...you so easily write lovely. Hugs!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2004-01-22 07:47 PM

Thanks, I'm happy you guys liked this,
and I appreciate you taking the time to tell me so.

Hugs and all that~

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