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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-01-22 05:14 PM


The sand shown gold upon their meet, along a road less traveled
When chivalry commanded enterprises hence unraveled
Of beauty that transcended time, or thy lady’s waiting
His skin as satin sheets a tingle, sea breezed skim articulating
A minuet of fondles, as his quiver her impassive touch
Eyes in longing locked upon this vision, eager wanting such
Time and endless while spent in the waters vacillating
Disrobed her knight and clothed in sheens of natures primal stating
Un-tethered her before him, under fingertips that played as rain
In passions arms his armor felled to hold her sighs a sacred plain
Unbridled did her warrior soul consume the airs entrust
And into surfs sweet ripple was our noble knight then thrust
His lady light became of animal before his eyes in wonder
Returning to the surfing seas his crest lest waves encumber
In turn delivered faithfully the screams of carnal pleasure
And lovers there begat the wake created for their treasure
Upon the shores of ecstasy these lovers timeless surging
And Lord and Lady of the beaches cradled in a Godly urging
To gentle swim these forms alight as sunsets calm imparted
The sand shown gold upon the print of love forever hearted

Copyright Kkh 1/22/04



© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2004-01-22 05:26 PM


Very powerful write, very charming and sensual. Beautiful images arouse.
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-01-22 05:29 PM


oh this is good!!!
very sensual, loving....
and sounds good rolling off the tongue

much enjoyed

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