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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Time slips through hope impassioned Where you once stood dreams are but moments sleeping Now, drifting into eternity faded corners colorless without scent silent tongues untouched flesh voiceless whispers dry and lone * I breathe you every now and then and dream moments best left sleeping |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Robert This was such a stunning piece of writing, yet so very sad. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh wow, this is superb... *sigh* very gentle, this deserves *applause* thank you for a lovely read! |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
Hi Robert, this is a lovely poem so well laid out and great imagery throughout. excellent regards Richard. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
a prayer between us could never be colorless |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I think more people should read this. I am in motion |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
this was awesome not much more to say |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh...so beautiful, the ending lines were my favorite. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I breathe you every now and then and dream moments best left sleeping" Hello RF...very much enjoyed the read. Extremely well penned. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
I breathe you every now and then and dream moments best left sleeping All's I can say is WOW! I love this ending especially!! Keep up the great work!!  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I breathe you every now and then and dream moments best left sleeping" You do brevity well...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Robert, I see everyone loved that same verse: * I breathe you every now and then and dream moments best left sleeping Me too...that's what I do M |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
excelent poetry, form and content enjoyed _______ice ><> |
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