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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-22 03:56 PM

Flurry

A flurry of white
stirred the tranquillity
of a darkened morning.
Sun hiding its warming
behind clouds of dismay.

No reflection today,
no shadows by my side,
only loneliness to handicap my walk.

Amputating those thoughts
that bare the wait,
that delay the reach into happiness,
a chore, on so cold a day.

Still,
the unconditional mists my eyes,
tips my lashes in white,
a soft touch remembering
a time when life was not stolen
and the tracings of love lingered,
to sustain me.

I wear the silk of touch.
Its weave, words whispered
from lips that hold
all that I need to know,
smoothing my ruffles
with each breath of yours
I feel.

The day eases,
the heart still beats
and when rhythm falls out of step
it is no longer anxiety,
but a flurry of thoughts
from a touch of your lips.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2004-01-22 04:07 PM

Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-01-22 04:28 PM

"Its weave, words whispered
from lips that hold
all that I need to know,"

you know, you keep me smiling...
here is a *hug* to return the favour.

~*~Dawn

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

3 posted 2004-01-22 04:31 PM

hi Nakdthoughts,
Beautiful.
take care richard.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2004-01-22 04:45 PM

You wrote this so beautifully.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-01-22 04:51 PM

"The day eases,
the heart still beats
and when rhythm falls out of step
it is no longer anxiety,
but a flurry of thoughts
from a touch of your lips."

Dang girl...this is SO good!
Love this closing stanza.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-01-22 05:11 PM

Thank you, Bridgette *s

Dawn, well you know lips do all the "telling"

I was so down in my first poem, I took a little rest and a warm bath and felt much better.

Richard, thank you for your nice comment. I appreciate it.

Sue, I needed to write something softer, so I thought of lips...they can always soften me up.

Nancy, I thought I was going to die this morning, my heart was beating so fast
(anxiety attack). I rested a bit, there was a snow flurry...
and I thought how can I pass this up...
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-01-26 12:12 PM

M~

"The day eases,
the heart still beats
and when rhythm falls out of step
it is no longer anxiety,
but a flurry of thoughts
from a touch of your lips."

That was really nice..

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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