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MexicoCityBlues
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since 2004-01-04
Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

0 posted 2004-01-21 11:01 PM



9 am
eyes are found
beneath two dead
stones

9 am and 15
watching snow accumulate
mind is dead
not to worry
Paul thrashes behind me

9 am 17
watching snow accumulate
may be need to worry
mind is dead
Paul is dead

9 am and 26
watching snow accumulate
mind is dead

9 am and 49
watching snow accumulate
mind is dead
panic

10 am
watching snow accumulate
mind is dead
what is?
the world is showing me
virtual emancipation

10 am and 11
watching snow accumulate
under blistered eyes
mind is dead
or so I thought

10 am and 32
watching snow accumulate
and writing about it
this paper is dead.

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix

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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2004-01-21 11:03 PM


Interesting thoughts!!!! I enjoyed the write!!!!
Take Care!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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