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Whisper (Rictameter) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Whisper Faint touch on lips Sweetly carried on wind Tenderly caressing my mind Hopscotching on those forgotten daydreams Desiring to fly above the cotton clouds Hearts melody playing symphonies throughout space and time As I numbly play in a sea of abstractions Leaning on the doors of my yesterdays Gliding through corridors of thought Nearby tranquility Echoing soft Whisper "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
Faint touch on lips Sweetly carried on wind Tenderly caressing my mind Excellent, a beautiful poem. Wonderfully written I feel. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful. So good to read you again Justbleu! hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
softly beautiful! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks everyone....  I read your rictameter Chris and was inspired to write one too. Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Bridgette...this is SOOOO lovely. Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Hearts melody playing symphonies throughout space and time As I numbly play in a sea of abstractions" Some very cool lines here Bridgette. Good to read you again...  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
speaking of lips....what are your's doing tonight?....got some free time?....LOL...sweet write gal... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You!!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bridgette~ This is simply a BEAUTIFUL poem~ I love the heartfelt render from you~ Gorgeous thoughts, dear poetess~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Justbleu A soft and lovely whisper.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've tried to write of whispers... we know I believe in them... but this... this is a  Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Marge...I know you alwayz prefer my lighter pieces. Thank YOU!!! Sy....Thank YOU BUNCHES!!! Vandana.....Thank YOU TOO!!! Karilea....You're a sweetie....Thank YOU!!! Duncan.....it's nice to know when I'm missed!!! Thank YOU!!! Enchantress....Thank YOU!!! Charisma....I think you alwayz call my poetry beautiful....Thank YOU!!!! It's alwayz fun when I play in the blue pages....I've had a fun leisurly day today reading a book....and hanging around here.   HUGS. Bridgette P.S. A sweet little birdie reminded me that I got a bit syllable hungry with this rictamter. So it's kinda not a rictameter but it's close. But, that's just like me to bend the rules a bit. "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This  thinks it's one of your loveliest~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, I am delighted to see you back, sweet friend, we have missed you sooooooo much, I could hear the whisper of your poet heart come resonating back! (big angel hugs) Yay, I hope you get to post more often, sweet friend, we all ove you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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