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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-21 01:59 PM

Cool to me,
is the deepness of blue eyes
iced to tempt a yearn,
yet warm enough to comfort.

A cool that can bring a burn within,
to a rise in senses on the out,
and when met in touch, sizzles.

Coolness...the lighter touch of warmth.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2004-01-21 02:05 PM

Great closing line, Maureen -- very attention-grabbing description.

-MVS

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Iron Wolf
Junior Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 23

2 posted 2004-01-21 02:07 PM

A cool that can bring a burn within

Now that's poetry for you

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-01-21 02:08 PM

I agree with Mark..

oh those little blue eyed beauties drive me *crazy*...

"A cool that can bring a burn within,
to a rise in senses on the out,
and when met in touch, sizzles."

HOT!

~*~hugs to you sweet Maureen~*~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-01-21 02:14 PM

This is exquisite! A Keeper !!! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-01-21 02:18 PM

indeed a keeper M. well done.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-01-21 02:30 PM

Thank you, Mark..I remembered there was an old challenge ...well not too old, but a challenge sitting in that forum waiting for someone to try it...

for some reason, I am sitting here in the cool/cold east and the words came to me.

Iron Wolf, thank you for stopping to read and respond.

Dawn..thanks

Chris, well it's a tiny one that's for sure *wink

Donna,I am glad you liked it. Thanks.
Hope you are keeping warm.

hugs
M

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2004-01-21 02:42 PM

You do have a way with words
enjoyed the read

Gloom

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2004-01-21 11:05 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautifully numb, sweet friend, one could never know how it feels to be gifted with such a blessing without feeling the contrast, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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