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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-01-21 08:59 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

I wrote this for Jeff whose words
are so inspiring. I admire him greatly
and I know my words speak for so many
who are in awe at his wonderful talent.

* * *

His words will take you on a journey
To another place in time
A bygone age of knights in armour
Back when true love was divine

His words have the ability
To make your heart skip a beat
As he writes of love and romance
You'll be swept right off your feet

His words are so uplifting
Upon silken wings you'll fly
As you travel far in distance
Way beyond the sapphire sky

Thoughts of love will touch your soul
They will fill your inner being
True romance in all its glory
Is what you will be seeing

Lose yourself in his words
Where life goes on without a care
Close your eyes and just imagine
And let his words take you there

* * *

"Wine comes in at the mouth
and love comes in at the eye
That's all we know for truth
before we grow old and die
I lift the glass to my mouth,
I look and you, and I sigh"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (01-21-2004 10:00 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-01-21 09:04 PM


breathtaking! jeff would be flattered. I especially love this part--

"His words are so uplifting
Upon silken wings you'll fly
As you travel far in distance
Way beyond the sapphire sky"


iliana
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2 posted 2004-01-21 09:12 PM


Great poem, Sue!
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-01-21 09:18 PM


You are so right Sue, his words always take me there.  What a talent, as are you also dear gal!
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4 posted 2004-01-21 09:36 PM


SweetSue~
Oh YES ... he WILL LOVE IT~

It's gorgeous dear poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-01-21 09:56 PM


This is beautiful Sue..
I know Jeff will love it.
He writes such wonderful pieces of Lords and Ladies.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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6 posted 2004-01-21 10:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I've got to get to read more of his precious poetry, sweet friend, Jeff is special just as you are and he can take you above clouds and through rainbows as you can! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Justbleu
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7 posted 2004-01-21 10:55 PM


Beautiful tribute...I bet he would be honored!!!  I should really read his poetry!!!!  I eat up that kind of stuff like crazy!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Ravenwolfvoyager
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8 posted 2004-01-21 11:45 PM


You are the shining light of an entity of warmth and compassion and I am forever touched by your kindness, your friendship and your sanctity of humanity and love. You are the one my friend that deserves the honors because we are very blessed to have you share your writes here before all of us.

Your love for your father makes a difference and impacts us by making us appreciate and respect the blessings in our lives.

Thank you Sue I really wish I could owe up to this. Everyone here at PIP is a mentour to me. I respect, appreciate and learn from everyone's work here, each one is a master Poet and I am humbled to be in the company of each one of these gifted artist.

Thank you Sue for your friendship and this very kind honor!!!!!!

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2004-01-22 03:11 PM


I knew I was not alone in my thoughts about Jeff and his wonderful writing and I thank you for your comments.

Jeff - Words fail me at this time as to your response but my heart was so warmly touched by your beautiful words.  Thank you for your friendship, encouragement and inspiration.

"Love alone is capable
of uniting human beings
in such a way as to
complete and fulfil them,
for it alone takes them
and joins them by what
is deepest in themselves"

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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10 posted 2004-01-23 12:02 PM


Sue:  Very nice tribute to Jeff and I can see it was much appreciated.

Betty Lou Hebert

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