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Ain't it time
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Ain't it time |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Ain't it Time Lifter of gloom, Reviver of tunes, Feared and forgotten so long. Kindler of the flame, That consumes once again, Sensual angel of song. Weaver of rhyme, Precious poet devine, I don't care,it don't matter, Take my heart on a platter, Forsake caution,let us dance, Forget mine. Live like it's your last day... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"lifter of gloom, reviver of tunes"... I LOVE this piece! Into my library it goes! ~K~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 you already know, this is a hearthug |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thanks Kdude,I'm learning from reading the likes of you.Appreciate the reply. Thank you Kacy,my gypsy of the sea...couldn't have felt it without you.I'm thrilled you liked it.  Live like it's your last day... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm dancing, like nobody's watching. 'tis past time |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Pucker up buttercup... Live like it's your last day... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Buttercup??? Buttercup? LOL, of course you had no way of knowing I had a Pot Belly pig named Buttercup who drank my Molson's beer. Hmm, think I'll look for that picture of ol Buttercup drinkin a brew, and send you a copy of it. I think I look a little bit better. ROTFLMAO. but here ya go anyway |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweeeeet! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
nothing like hearing an old tune revived,,,,either by the writer, or a remake(that doesn't bomb}, nice write take care Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Great structure, and very smooth writing. Was this poem for Poet DeVine? I wonder, because Sharon can be very intoxicating. I really like the poem, BB. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thank you all for reading and your replys...as intoxicating and deserving as Sharon is I got to admit I've been captivated and smitten by the charms of another poetic Goddess and fine dancer here at passions.Maybe you ought to praise the virtues of Sharon with a write of your own LJ.I'm sure she'd love it.Thanks again. Live like it's your last day... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A wonderful piece..... This kind of stuff is my favorite!!!! I'd like to read more!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Me too, Bridgette. More please.  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*sigh* ...just too darned lovely  |
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