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Open Poetry #30

Someone else's castle

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-21 08:26 PM

In a mighty world
On their day
They took my life away

In a mighty life
On a funny day
I took their world away

In a mighty mood
On a lousy day
I learnt to laugh

In a mighty world
On a bad day
They stopped
To laugh at me
And laugh, and laugh

In a good world
On a sane day
Their castles blew away
Into sand

In my own world
On a nice day
I longed for their’s

Isn’t that the way

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2004-01-21 08:34 PM

"isnt that the way"-- indeed it is! well done.

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