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Open Poetry #30

Prayer

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2004-01-21 10:10 AM

Dear God, a prayer
for one more chance
a common prayer
and now we dance

a point of pride
to not submit
a point inside
will not admit

dear God, a Prayer
to understand
Redeem ones self
and start again

and reason speaks
to many things
but then grows weak
fore king of kings

So one more time
Dear God, I'll pray
for proof of you
to light my way

and if its not
for you to say
I'll simply make
my pain my prey

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

1 posted 2004-01-21 10:52 AM

hi I liked the prayer,well done
Richard

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

2 posted 2004-01-21 11:11 AM

This is outstanding.
I love the last line,

I'll make my pain my prey.

Wow, that's great.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03