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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-12-29 11:06 PM

time
to find another way
time
to put an end to
'now'
show me...beg thee
know not how to
have this be the last
'today'
of this...

this empty silentry
in echo of
soliloquy
the voices?
yes..they speak to me
from here inside
my head and
yes...
my mind is of it's
own regard in
wonderment of
lunacy and
moments caught
in-sanity
rare comfort for the
all of we
in
me

~Vicky L. Raynes
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-29 11:17 PM

Oh Wow...a power packed piece Vicky!
Extremely well written..leaving much for the reader to ponder.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-12-30 12:44 PM

this empty silentry
in echo of
soliloquy
the voices?
=====================

So you have met me muse then?

Love the vocab and the turn of phrase in this poetess Vicky-girl.

I can remember Forever December,
The center of dying ... the heart of the pain.
The stars surround me ... the cold astounds me.

Tabitha's Secret

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-30 02:36 AM

wow

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2003-12-30 03:10 AM

This that time of year for introspection, and looks like you are doing it well. I really enjoyed this Miss Vicky, very powerful stuff. Happy New Year.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-12-30 08:19 PM

Vicky~
I know the feel of this one~

Missing you something powerful my friend~

Happy New Year's wishes to you and yours, Vicky~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-12-30 08:46 PM

Vicky...Amazed at this poem...understanding hug!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-12-30 09:47 PM

Your poetry is exceptional whether you're upbeat or somberly introspective, my friend. This is a wonderful piece of work... I think you should be writing more... yep...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-12-30 09:49 PM

my mind is of it's
own regard in
wonderment of
lunacy and
moments caught
in-sanity
rare comfort for the
all of we
in
me

~*~

Do I know you?

I do...

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2003-12-30 10:55 PM

every passing second puts and end to "now"... it's how you interpret those ending seconds that either keeps "now" continuing or truly ends it.
I've missed you *hugs*

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2003-12-30 11:01 PM

oh wow is right....
I've not read you much before must not have realised that you were definitely one to look for on these pages.
This is great.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2004-01-20 10:18 PM

Ah...Lunacy I understand...

written well, my friend!

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

12 posted 2004-01-21 02:34 AM

this one just swirl and whirl its way right round my chest...
this flows and flows so easily....

i terribly enjoyed this

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2004-01-21 07:55 AM

this empty silentry
in echo of
soliloquy
the voices?
yes..they speak to me
from here inside
my head and
yes...
my mind is of it's
own regard in
wonderment of
lunacy and
moments caught
in-sanity
rare comfort for the
all of we
in
me

Yes Vicky many times it seems to be stuck here inside of my head...
this is outstanding work Vicky. Hugs

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

14 posted 2004-01-21 01:08 PM

very nice, Vicky!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2004-01-21 11:15 PM

(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I believe every now and then we have to stand there in the hall of mirrors and talk to ourselves so we understand ourselves and what we wnat with so much clarity! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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